Twitchy Finger Good song, but maybe more bass? I like low sounds in songs, although I understand that this isn't really a song that low-frequency sounds would work well with. It isn't too repetitive, but I think you could include less high frequency because it hurts my ears. Also, at about 1:00, the high frequency goes into overdrive, which doesn't really invoke much feeling.
There are some good ideas in the song, but they're just little snippets. I feel that throughout the song, you're building onto a great idea, but then the excitement sort of dies. I do like how at 1:30 you start going with less high-frequency, and I think you could have continued with that a bit more. 1:40 is great, it's probably my favourite part of the song, but the ambient sounds in the background don't really fit the tune. But it also has the same tune for about 25 seconds, and it doesn't really engage me (Not that I can talk, because a lot of my songs are like that XD).
I don't really understand how this could be classified as a dance song because it doesn't make me feel like I want to jump up and dance to this tune.
I like the transition from 2:10 to 2:20, it sounds very good, and it's definitely a very good progression in your song. You also surprised me with no bass drop there I was half expecting it.
In 2:40 to about 3:00 I like that you're experimenting with different sounds but some of the sounds could be louder or quieter, because a lot of the sounds you're using are quite annoying, which should be kept at a lower sound, whereas some of the loops you're using during that time are quite nice, and really make a difference to the sound of the song.
I love the tune all the way from the 3:00 mark until the end, no criticism here, this sound is well woven into the fabric and is engaging enough for it not to feel annoying.
The ending is great and is very suitable. It is definitely a great improvement from the start and is overall well-sounding.
I hope this review has been of some help to you because I've spent about 30 mins on it and I actually enjoy doing it.
Thanks,
AllinatorBEATS
Dark Angel - F-777 
