Incise ~ Acquire Overall, good song.
The high pitched lead sound sounded good at first, but after continuing throughout the entire song, it starts to become annoying without any variation. Try to change it up every few 8 bars or so. Also, during the drop, there's a whirly bass sound that almost cancels everything else out, just turn that down a bit. Also, the rain/grain noise after the first drop, just cut that out.
The riser actually worked with the track, and didn't sound too sudden, it flowed well.
The white noise at the start was a subtle but good change, although I noticed that the melody got quieter as you implemented it.
You should definitely keep producing music
Good job!
Discord - living tombstone 
