So the drums at the start don't really work with the beat and throughout the song, there is a honky-tonk piano playing the same note over and over again, which is annoying. It's definitely overused in this song. The melody is good, I like how you incorporate that into the song.
At the end for the last 30 seconds, it's just the same thing over and over again, which is repetitive and annoying.
Overall a good song with a good rhythm
Ummmmm mate, all you did was change the pich!!!
A little bit toooo long but that's only because it has the same sort of melody.
I think you might need to change up the sounds a bit but DONT MAKE IT FAST. The way that the tune goes with the song really intrigues me.
I'm definitely keeping you on my radar.
Release another song, and if it's good, I'll scout you!
Nice. Good job on that one.
Well thought-out song, like the ideas behind it.
You have been scouted!!!
Thanks I thought it was bad but it's nice to see people like it.
Wow! This song is really well thought out, with lots of well-rehearsed changes. Good Job!
Beautiful feedback! ~
Like my last review, the entire song is just the same loop over and over again, and it starts to get boring. If you want to, just put this song as a 'loop' when you upload it.
It's really important.
Thank you very much :)
It sounds cool, but it's kinda obvious that you're using loops because it's pretty much the same thing for 1 minute. If you extended, you could make this into a really cool song.
Thank you, um ... Thank you for your help!
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